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Hank Doyle's Voice on the Radio That Icy Night

Fiction · A Pine Hollow Story · Pine Hollow, Ohio

By the DailyVibeX Editors · Published in Pine Hollow · 5 min read

Hank Doyle's Voice on the Radio That Icy Night (Chapter 1)

Hank Doyle was three miles away at his kitchen table when he heard Avery Collins's tires go silent on the ice.

But that came later. At noon on Tuesday, the only thing Hank could hear was his own back.

He had thrown it out Sunday carrying a recliner up the church basement stairs. Now he lay on the living room floor with a heating pad under him while Lorraine stood over him with her arms folded.

"Forty-four years," she said. "Forty-four years, and you finally found something heavier than your pride."

"It was a very big recliner."

Every year, Hank drove the Grace Methodist box truck to the food bank warehouse in Zanesville two days before Thanksgiving. He brought back a hundred and twenty turkeys and the boxes that went with them. Pastor Sam Greer and the volunteers handed them out Wednesday morning. Some families on Creek Road would not have a holiday dinner without that truck.

This year, Hank was not going to make it to the truck. He could barely make it to the bathroom.

* * *

Avery came by at one. She was twenty and wanted to drive trucks for a living, and Hank had been teaching her since spring. She already handled the twenty-six-foot box truck better than most men he'd ridden with.

"Pastor Sam says I can take it," she said. "If you say so."

Hank looked at the window. The sky over the ridge was the color of dishwater.

"Freezing rain after dark," he said. "They're saying maybe. When they say maybe this time of year, they mean yes."

"I'll be loaded and home by six."

"You'll be loaded when that warehouse gets to you. Holiday week, they're short on help." He reached up from the floor. "Hand me that radio."

The old CB sat on the end table where Lorraine kept making him move it. Hank had a matching set mounted in the church truck years ago, because cell phones were no good in the hollows. Half of Calder County was dead air between ridges.

He keyed the mic. "Bluebird, you take this one with you. Channel 19. You check in at the warehouse, you check in when you leave, and you check in at the top of every hill. Ohio Valley will be listening."

Avery rolled her eyes, but she smiled. Bluebird had been her handle since the first week, because she whistled when she drove.

"Rules," Hank said. "Say them back."

She said them back. "Listen to the tires. When the road goes quiet, it's ice. When the spray stops coming off the trucks ahead of you, it's freezing. If it gets slick, turn the exhaust brake off and leave it off. Never brake hard on ice. Find the crunch."

"Find the crunch," Hank said. "Good."

* * *

She called in from the warehouse at three-forty.

"Ohio Valley, Bluebird. I'm third in line at the dock."

Hank had worked his way up to the kitchen table by then, with Lorraine's help and a pillow behind him. He listened past her voice the way he always did. A truck has a sound like a person has a face.

"Bluebird, you've got a blower motor going bad on that heater," he said. "Hear that tick? Keep it on low tonight. If it quits, you'll lose your defrost."

There was a pause on the line. "How in the world can you hear that?"

"Two point eight million miles," Hank said. "You learn to listen or you learn to walk."

The dock foreman came on her side of the radio, laughing. "Kid, get a weather app. You don't need an old man on a CB."

Avery said something to him Hank didn't catch. The foreman did not laugh again.

* * *

They did not load her until twenty past eight.

By then the rain had started. Hank could hear it on her windshield every time she keyed the mic, a soft steady patter under the wipers. Lorraine set a cup of decaf in front of him and sat down across the table without saying a word. She had sat up with him on plenty of nights when he was the one out there.

At nine-thirty, a trucker came on the channel from somewhere near the county line. Route 9 was shut down at the big curve. A tractor-trailer had slid into the ditch and blocked both lanes. The driver was fine, but traffic was not getting through until morning.

Hank closed his eyes.

The only other way into Pine Hollow from that side was Lutz Hollow Road. Two narrow miles down off the ridge, the steepest grade in the county, with the railroad crossing at the bottom.

"Bluebird, Ohio Valley. You hear about Route 9?"

"I heard." Her voice was calm. He was proud of that. "Taking Lutz Hollow."

"Then go slow and go now, before it gets worse. Spray still coming off the cars ahead?"

"There aren't any cars ahead."

Hank looked at the kitchen clock. Ten-forty.

* * *

She called from the top of the grade at ten-fifty-two.

"Ohio Valley, Bluebird. I'm at the top of Lutz Hollow. Starting down."

"Low gear. Exhaust brake off."

"It's off."

She kept the mic keyed a moment longer than she needed to. Hank listened. Engine low and steady. Wipers. The tick of the blower motor. And under all of it, the hiss of wet tires on blacktop, the sound of a road that still had some grip in it.

Then, halfway through her next sentence, the hiss stopped.

It did not fade. It just quit, like somebody had turned off a faucet. The engine was still there and the wipers were still there, but the road had gone silent.

Hank was already leaning toward the radio, his back forgotten.

"Avery," he said. "You're on ice."

"I know." Her voice had gone small. "Hank, there's a car sideways at the bottom of the hill, right at the crossing. And the train's blowing for Lutz Hollow."

The Conclusion

What happened when the truth came out?

Part 2 picks up right where this leaves off.

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